My comment has value because of what we know about how people read articles and engage with causes.
If you just want to write a diary, then you can structure it however you like.
If, however, your intention is to raise awareness of a situation or minority, then it behooves you to make it as engaging as it is credibly informative and comprehensive for as wide as audience as possible. If you are actually trying to raise awareness through an article, all of those elements must be satisfied.
This short article contains thirteen links, many of which lead to statistics or bureaucratic processes.
Trying to raise awareness by obligating the reader, who may be learning about this for the first time, to click literally over a dozen links that require further clickthroughs is not going to help engagement with the article or raise awareness and support as much as you apparently think it is.
Neither is being insulting or making assumptions based on your own misapprehension of my comment.